Hy people. This is my first ff so don't be too strict with the clerks. Still, I would be happy about some.

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The Dragon Order

Part1: Discord

A cool wind swept these days through the alleys of Nerima. It was a starry night, one of those nights when you could lose yourself in the stars. At the dojo of the Tendos you couldn't hear the usual battle cries, no, that evening Ranma was sitting very concentrated in the training hall and meditating. There was a fine light blue aura around his body. After 6 hours of maximum concentration, he finished his training. - I've gotten a lot better lately - he praised himself. But when he crawled into his bed that evening, the thoughts that actually drove him to meditation plagued him again. Two more days and then Akane's 18th birthday would be. Ranma had often caught the thought of giving her an engagement ring and confessing his love to her, but just as often he had thought of just running away after graduating from school and leaving everything behind.-The school graduation is still 3 weeks and the time has come. But what then? My age will only talk about marriage again and Akane will freak out ... -. So he fell asleep lost in thought, tomorrow he would talk to Kasumi that would be the best.
Akane woke up early in the morning. She opened the silk curtains and saw a bright morning. -Just one more day, what will Ranma give me? - But she did not have too high hopes for herself. It's true Ranma had become nicer to her, but that was what made her nervous. Meanwhile Ranma gathered all his courage and stepped into the kitchen "Kasumi can I talk to you for a moment?" "Kasumi, I'll tell you a secret now. Please listen to me without interrupting me. So I love Akane and I want to give her an engagement ring tomorrow."
Had she really just heard that? Akane leaned against the kitchen door to listen - No, that's impossible, he won't ... -"If you are really serious then we'll meet in the city in an hour, okay Ranma? But only come if you are one hundred percent sure." Answered the visibly surprised but very pleased Kasumi and left the kitchen. Akane scurried quickly to her room so that Ranma didn't notice her when he left the house in a good mood.
He was jogging through the old town when he suddenly felt a strange energy. With one big leap, he just jumped aside. Where he had stood a second before, a ball of fire struck a deep hole in the earth. Ranma immediately went into fighting position "Who are you and what do you want?" he shouted at his enemy. The latter stopped at a distance and eyed Ranma with interest. "Follow me!" and the stranger was running towards the beach. Without thinking, Ranma rushed after him. When he arrived the stranger was already waiting for him. Ranma looked at him a little more closely. He wore a long black robe with the hood pulled down over his face.A golden snake was neatly embroidered on the robe. Suddenly the stranger broke the silence. “My name is Ragil and this is where you will find your death.” With these words he ran towards Ranma and hurled another fireball at him. Ranma skilfully wiped it out and kicked Ragil at lightning speed. He seemed surprised and had to take a few painful hits. "Firewall" shouted Ragil and before Ranma could avoid him he was surrounded by black flames. Ragil formed his hands in a kind of prayer position and the ground within the flames began to glow a poison green. Ranma immediately lost his strength and fell on his knees. "I thought so, typical dragons only fight with force. But you are defenseless against the snake's techniques.
Ranma didn't understand. His eyes became heavy, he could barely hold his consciousness. “I'll let you live today.” Ragil whispered, lowering his hands. The green glow went out but Ranma stayed on the ground."I would get up. My friend had visited your fiancée. She is waiting for you at the dojo." And with these words he was gone. After a few seconds Ranma was back on her feet, his strength was back. As fast as he could, he stormed back towards Tendos. Out of breath, he got to his destination and ran into the house. "Ranma how could you!" Kasumi yelled and before he knew it she had slapped him hard on the face. "What the?" "I thought you were serious but instead you beat Akane up and mock her. And then you hit her too." Except for Akane himself, all the Tendos and his father had now stepped into the hallway, all with the greatest disgust in their eyes. "Stop that wasn't me, I was in town and ..." "Shut up!" Kasumi snapped at him.
Ranma had never seen her so angry. “Go away, get out of here.” Ranma turned and ran out of the house. - That lousy Ragil, I'll finish it off. "But when the night was already falling over Nerima, Ranma only became aware of his situation.He couldn't go back until he found Ragil and Akane must have hated him. –I'd best go to Ukyo. - Ten minutes later he was standing in front of her little shop. But Ukyo was already in the door. "Not a step closer. I know they kicked you out and now you come here. Forget it, first you hit Akane and then you finish Ryoga and leave him badly injured in front of my shop. What's the matter with you, just because you can, you still can't hit anyone who doesn't suit you. "Anger sparkled in her eyes. - Whichever Ryoga damn it can't be. - "Ukyo listen to me, I wasn't that, that's a misunderstanding ..." but he didn't get any further. Ukyo raised her spatula and raised her threateningly. "Get out of here, come back when you're normal." Ranma turned around and ran into the night.

Akane was crying in her bed. -How could he just I don't want to see anymore. Never again that pig. "Kasumi stepped into her room and sat down on her bed."Akane, I kicked Ranma out for the time being. Maybe everything will work out." But there was more anger than confidence in Kasumi's voice. - If only she wouldn't love him-

Ryoga, on the other hand, thought about the past. –Ranma was so good, I didn't have the slightest chance. And his eyes, they were so vicious. If I hadn't experienced it myself I would never believe it was Ranma. -Ukyo stepped quietly into the room. "How are you?" "Well, it was better. Ukyo tomorrow morning I'll break out I have to talk to Ranma." Back came just an incredulous grumble. "Forgive me but he was so different, something is wrong. Trust me." "I wish you were right Ryoga, it was all just a misunderstanding."

Ranma sank to her knees. Tears welled out of his eyes, shampoo had also turned him away because of Akane and Ryoga. He had no one left. All of his friends had turned against him. Suddenly Cologne stepped out of the shadows of the night. "Ranma stop crying, I believe you, come follow me please."Ranma looked at her." Thank you. "He straightened up." This way. "Said Cologne and showed him the way to the Cat Cafe. Ranma marched off with renewed hope. But because of his grief, he hadn't noticed Cologne's malicious look nor the nasty grin she wore ...
Sequel follows…

So that's it for now. The story is only just building. That was just like an introduction. I already know what to do next. But if you think I should leave it then say that and I'll stop, it's up to you!