So people...
After a while, it is likely that many of them feel that they no longer like their own stories ... That's exactly how it is with me now.
I still like the story (not that you get it wrong now), just the way I wrote it, it's just too ... I don't know what.

That means by and large that I will soon delete these parts here and present them in a new version.

I hope that the few readers remain loyal to me.

Your yoko