So now have fun with the beginning of my TdV version ...

A cool breeze gently brushed Sarah's soft hair. She smiled and slowly straightened up. It was cold, like all Transylvanian winters, but Sarah barely felt the cold. It was a clear winter night. Snow trickled down gently and softly on them. She turned around.
"Well, you two? Hurry up !!" she called to her friends Maruschka and Irene. The three of them had been sent into the forest to look for firewood, and Maruschka and Irene had been trembling with fear since they had been in the forest. Sarah grinned. "Are you afraid of the dark ..?" Irene blushed. "You are really funny Sarah !!! It's totally dark! And cold ..... and there are wolves here too ..." Maruschka interrupted her: "YES! Besides, you know the old story ... d. .you ... know .. about Dracula .. "
Sarah started giggling. She shook her chestnut curls from her face and smiled at her friends."And if so! I prefer to take this risk instead of being stared at and laughed at by these disgusting village idiots during the day .." Sarah quickly turned her face away.
She didn't want her friends to notice the tears silently flowing down her cheeks ... * ... yes ... the day. . people can hurt you terribly ... and me .. *
Sarah smiled pained. * Nobody understands anyway .. *
Her only consolation was the night. Nobody dared go out, they were all too afraid of the dark ... but Sarah loved the blackness of the night. At night you could see so many beautiful things .. and hear .. * like this voice .... * Sarah heard it night after night, a tender, loving voice that led her away from this world - but Sarah did not know where it came from Just that she's been there since her father locked her up.
Her father ran an inn. Many strange characters had already been guests in this place ... that's why her father locked her up for 4 years now.Now Sarah was almost 18. She hated this imprisonment ... and yet she had something good- Sarah didn't have to go around people anymore.
Sighing, she picked up her small bundle of brushwood. "Come on, let's go .." Then she saw her friends' eyes widen in shock. "W..what is ..?" But now Sarah also noticed something.
A shadow flitted through the hedges and trees, light and silent.
Maruschka gave a sharp scream and ran away through the snow together with Irene in wild panic. Sarah stayed behind.
She wasn't afraid, she somehow knew that nothing would happen to her ...
She walked slowly through the darkness, aimlessly ... and yet guided by a strange, mystical force ...

And? how do you like it so far ..? I would be very interested in your opinion, whether positive or negative! ^^