Solitude

I sit lonely and abandoned in this dark abandoned place.
I scream as loud as I can, but nobody hears me.
Nobody who walks past me even gives me a look.
I am lost.
Nobody needs me - nobody loves me.
My heart is already completely destroyed.
Loneliness has slowly let it rot away.
It was literally devoured by her.
It eats its way into my body and there is nothing I can do about it, except wait - to hope that maybe someone will save me after all.
But basically I know that this will not happen again!
Everyone has given up on me.
And so I'm sitting here all alone.
Tears keep flowing from my eyes.
I'm still trying to get up, but my legs have already been paralyzed.
So I sit here and hope that I will soon be redeemed from the suffering.
I hope the loneliness is over soon.

mausi-ran

Comment on the poem: I wrote that when I was feeling really bad.It's not the best poem I've ever written, but every time I read it I get a strange feeling, I hope it is the same for you. What I particularly like about the poem is that everyone has or will be involved in this situation. Everyone feels lonely at one point or another. I think the poem reflects the feeling quite well. Please give me your opinion on this