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Fanfic: Bloody Roar * Seelentreffen *
Chapter: The eyes
Chapter 4
When they finally got there, they quickly ran to the front door because the rain was falling harder and harder from the sky.
While Alice was looking for the keys in her pocket, Uriko waited impatiently, because she urgently had to go to the toilet. Uriko looked around the deserted street a bit.
It looked very cloudy, very different from that morning. * Funny how fast the weather changes. Just like in 'War of the Worlds'. Could almost scare you ... mmmhh? What was that? *
It looked as if there was something in the bushes of the house opposite hers.
Uriko took a closer look, but could hardly see anything because of the heavy rain.
But then all of a sudden she saw it!
“AAAHH !! EYES!” Uriko screamed in panic. But Alice had already opened the door and was startled by Uriko's scream that they both stumbled in and fell on the carpet. Uriko got up immediately and slammed the door behind her.
“What should that be again?” Alice was annoyed again. She took off her dirty shoes and brushed the dirt off her pants, then went into the kitchen.Uriko was still sitting on the floor and staring at the door. "B-but Alice ..."
"Nothing but ... do you want warm cocoa too?"
Uriko didn't answer * What was that? Totally scary! *
"Uriko? Hello?" Alice looked around the corner at Uriko "What are you still sitting around? URIKO ?!"
"Heeeh? Oh! Yes, yes, I would like one too." Uriko got up and took off her shoes "I'm just going to put on something warmer for a moment." And she ran up the stairs.
She quickly put on a warm, red wool sweater and sweatpants underneath. Dan ran her down to Alice in the kitchen "Here I am again."
"Then sit down in the living room, then we can watch TV."
Alice put cups and cookies on a tray. Then she followed Uriko into the living room. She put the tray down on the table and they sat down.
Uriko looked out the window at the street again. The bushes rustled more and more violently from the wind and rain.
"WÄH! ..." Uriko was startled again and Alice looked at her questioningly"eeh hehe ... it's pretty light here!" lied Uriko and looked at Alice innocently. Then she got up and drew the curtains. She sat down next to Alice again and they watched TV together.
So that's it again until now .. I REALLY want to make it really exciting but I have to think about how I can get the tension in there =. =
Well I KNOW this chapter is OVER short but well .. since I haven't got that many commis yet (actually only one>. <... Thanks Tami-Chan ^^) I can't improve myself without your tips TT
Byebyezz
Alisha-Faye
When they finally got there, they quickly ran to the front door because the rain was falling harder and harder from the sky.
While Alice was looking for the keys in her pocket, Uriko waited impatiently, because she urgently had to go to the toilet. Uriko looked around the deserted street a bit.
It looked very cloudy, very different from that morning. * Funny how fast the weather changes. Just like in 'War of the Worlds'. Could almost scare you ... mmmhh? What was that? *
It looked as if there was something in the bushes of the house opposite hers.
Uriko took a closer look, but could hardly see anything because of the heavy rain.
But then all of a sudden she saw it!
“AAAHH !! EYES!” Uriko screamed in panic. But Alice had already opened the door and was startled by Uriko's scream that they both stumbled in and fell on the carpet. Uriko got up immediately and slammed the door behind her.
“What should that be again?” Alice was annoyed again. She took off her dirty shoes and brushed the dirt off her pants, then went into the kitchen.Uriko was still sitting on the floor and staring at the door. "B-but Alice ..."
"Nothing but ... do you want warm cocoa too?"
Uriko didn't answer * What was that? Totally scary! *
"Uriko? Hello?" Alice looked around the corner at Uriko "What are you still sitting around? URIKO ?!"
"Heeeh? Oh! Yes, yes, I would like one too." Uriko got up and took off her shoes "I'm just going to put on something warmer for a moment." And she ran up the stairs.
She quickly put on a warm, red wool sweater and sweatpants underneath. Dan ran her down to Alice in the kitchen "Here I am again."
"Then sit down in the living room, then we can watch TV."
Alice put cups and cookies on a tray. Then she followed Uriko into the living room. She put the tray down on the table and they sat down.
Uriko looked out the window at the street again. The bushes rustled more and more violently from the wind and rain.
"WÄH! ..." Uriko was startled again and Alice looked at her questioningly"eeh hehe ... it's pretty light here!" lied Uriko and looked at Alice innocently. Then she got up and drew the curtains. She sat down next to Alice again and they watched TV together.
So that's it again until now .. I REALLY want to make it really exciting but I have to think about how I can get the tension in there =. =
Well I KNOW this chapter is OVER short but well .. since I haven't got that many commis yet (actually only one>. <... Thanks Tami-Chan ^^) I can't improve myself without your tips TT
Byebyezz
Alisha-Faye