Hello! I'm brand new here and have finished my first chapter of my FF on Jeanne, the Kamikaze thief!

"Marron? Hey, Marron, wake up! Miyako will be right here to pick you up!"
"Hmm?" It was Fin. I stared at her briefly and then closed my eyes again.
"Do you hear? The summer vacation is over and you have to go to school !!!" she said and shook me like mad. After 5 minutes I couldn't sleep anymore, got up and got dressed. It has been about a year since all demons disappeared and since then I haven't seen a single one.
Suddenly someone pounded on the door. It was Miyako who shouted at the same time:
"Maaaaarooooon !!!! Get up !!!!! We have to go to Schuuuuleee !!!!
I opened the door and saw Miyako's puzzled face.
"Since ... since when do you get up so early?" She stammered to herself.
"I was woken up!" I said annoyed and looked at Fin. I closed the door and then saw Chiaki, who was standing next to Miyako. He came up to me, hugged me and said:"Oh, how I missed you again!"
"You only saw me yesterday or not?"
"That's it! I would have loved to spend the whole night with you !!", he said and grinned.
"W ... waaaaas?!?! You don't have them all anymore !!!!" I yelled at him. I blushed, punched him, and just walked away. We've been together for a year now and he was still making comments like that. I'm slowly wondering how long I can hold out but I think this relationship will hold out for a very, very, ... long time. Miyako stared at us and wondered how I could stand it. And Chiaki? He sat on the floor with a red cheek and laughed.
We got to school on time. I was wondering because that doesn't usually happen.
Then Chiaki and I were kicked out of class because Chiaki let go of one of his jokes and I freaked out. So it was a normal day until ...

At home I looked in the mailbox and I saw a letter.Of course it was one of Chiaki's again. It said:> I'll come over tonight. So don't be frightened when you wake up next to me! Your Chiaki Hey Marron-chan! I heard that from your parents. Did they really just leave you like that? I am really sorry. Are you all alone now Well, not soon anymore because I'll visit you! I hope you have a second bed! See you soon! Your cousin Yuki-chan
I went to the balcony. Fin followed me and kept asking me: "Marron? What's wrong? What's wrong? Hey! I'm talking to you !!". Next to her, Chiaki was on the balcony. He looked into my horrified face and asked me. "What's wrong? Don't you like my letter?" I looked at him with rolling eyes and said nothing."She doesn't talk to me either!" Fin moaned again. "They're coming ..." I said, staring into the moon-lit city. "Who's coming?" Asked Acces. He, Chiaki, and Fin stared at me in confusion. I kept staring into the gloomy city and said: "The demons, they are coming again!".

I hope you like it and I ask for comments but please don't be too hard (I'm only 13) !!
Your
Keiko-chan