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Fanfic: No mercy.
an unexplained fire, probably caused by a careless youth. An event that was given a full five seconds of airtime on Tokyo News before turning back to sports.
At that moment, however, only Mu-Tsu, a male Amazon, stepped out of the dark side street and into the open.He took a quick breath, and all tension seemed to be relieved from him. The roaring noise of rush hour on Tokyo's streets greeted him, as did the constant murmuring of the many people.
So far the day has passed, Mu-Tsu was sure, well ...
... but maybe it could get even better?
One last look back. Meanwhile, judging by the clouds of smoke, the flames seemed to have found more fuel. Then he turned his gaze towards Nerima and strode away.
Disappeared in the hectic crowd and immediately jumped over the flatter and lower roofs back to the Neko-Hanten.
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Was it bearable?
I would be very happy about "meaningful" criticism and suggestions for corrections.
Certainly, comments regarding my "spelling" (or the severe lack of one) are also permitted, but the criticism should please refer primarily to the story itself.
Thank-you. ^^
Should I give someone the afternoon orHave "messed up" the evening or any other time of day, I would like to apologize many times.
This is, as one might suspect, a one-shot, so no further chapter - at most a kind of sequel - will follow, but a potential comment would be welcome.
(How many times do I mention this now?)
Bye
See you soon,
your deep dream