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Fanfic: Zerrissene Seele

processed their pain.
Unlike her, Akane.
She had never overcome the loss of the only person she had ever loved so much. For this had become clear to her in the last moments of his life; that she loved him.
If only she had told him earlier ..... She had reproached herself for that over and over again in the past few months. But none of it helped. He hadn't returned to her, and neither would he in this life.
During the past few months, a decision had matured in her that she would put into practice today. If she couldn't be with him in this life, then she wouldn't live this life either. Because that didn't work, as she'd discovered. She would follow him. At least that way she could be with him in heaven.

I look downIn my reflection
It's in the grass
In a sea of ​​blood
Red color everywhere

She stepped closer to the abyss. Her toes were already looking over the edge and under her feet some small stones came loose and fell into the depths.

Pain
memories
Feelings

She remembered his last two sentences very well, which had been burned into her memory.

They were locked
In a dark box
In the eternal blackness of the inside
They should stay there
To the eternity

"My soul would smile if it saw you happy ....."

"You have to promise me that you will be happy ...!"

Strands of thought
Experiences pass me by
Long past pictures
Which should be forgotten

But there was one thing he hadn't considered.

I feel
How the chains reach for me
Pull yourself tighter around me
Cold comes over me
A shiver makes me tremble

"Because I can only be happy with you ....!"She whispered softly into the night and jumped.

I see my reflection in the mirror
Look to the sky
I see how I do
Look to the sky
My eyes close
Black surrounds me
The end is coming

I am finally free.

So and here is the end :) I hope you enjoyed it.
At the beginning I had set myself the goal of getting to the 3000 word limit, because most of them always complain that my chapters are too short and that this is a complete story. (:)) But then it turned out to be almost 4000 words to my expectations; D

The poem, which is listed in full at the beginning and then again at the end, comes from me. The title of this ff is also the title of my poem :)

The italic print in between (I hope that it is in italics even after uploading; D) are my thoughts that I made on the subject of suicide :)

For me it was already clear from the start that the two would die ... Ranma's death was not exactly determined yet, but Akane's was planned from the beginning.In the middle, I actually didn't want to let the two of them die anymore ... everything went so well and I had a lot of fun letting the two annoy each other ... (* devil be *) but I had to. ... otherwise I would have had to change the previous pages where I had been sitting for so long ... I always find the beginning of writing the worst * howl *

I also thought about writing a little addition to my drama; D
Torn souls - behind the scenes :-) with a lot of humor and parody ..... how my so-called "actors" do or have done before their FF performance and while playing; DD I would be very happy to receive feedback on this.

Your diaper

PS: Not to be forgotten, I still want clerks of course; DD I would also be interested in whether it was dramatic enough and it wasn't a total flop; D
PPS: If I don't get any clerks, then I go to a dark corner and cry a lot T_T
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