hi first of all, I hope you won't see that for a short time ... hope you will like it !!
Have fun reading Kommis very welcome, criticism too!


Marron was surprised. She didn't know why she couldn't transform anymore, but the new strength was impressive. It pulsed in her veins and now Marron was transformed. Her hair turned blonde and long. Her clothes became a short white dress with a red belt. The things were nicely decorated and partly set with crystals. ,, Maroon! This power is yours only. You have to learn to control them. You also have to use them so that you are always fit. You can always use the power. Also as chestnut. Only transform when you have to steal. “Yes, that's good!” Marron had the feeling of falling again. Then she was on the hospital floor. She got up slowly. Her legs were wobbly. There was a bleeding wound on her forehead. She was alone in the room. Briefly she concentrated her power and the wound healed in a few seconds.Maron now went to a sink, wet paper towels and brushed the blood from the floor, which got through her wound on the floor. After doing that, she sat on the bed. She was exhausted because she couldn't control the force. Only now did she notice that she was all alone. There was a knock and then the door opened. It was Chiak with his father. "Maron are you better? "" I don't know what you mean. I was fine the whole time! "" You collapsed! "My legs only gave way because I was exhausted." "And that your condition was so bad that you almost died? What about it? "Well, maybe I wasn't feeling very well, but I'm fine now and I'm going home straight away." "No Marron! ", Kaiki, Chiaki's father, intervened." You have to rest! "" You don't get it, do you? I have neither time nor desire to rest! "Marron, do you really want to put your health at risk?Just because you don't listen to us "" Chiaki, if you see it that way, yes! Then I'm putting my health at risk! There are more important things. "" Oh, and what is that? "Marron went now and whispered to Chiaki:" You should know that! "She went on and closed the door. She had waited so long and now Chiaki hadn't even understood her. Suddenly something jerked her backwards. It wasn't Chiaki but Noin. She screamed, but after a short time Noin Maron managed to stun it. After the scream, Chiaki and Kaiki opened the door to check on Marron. But all they found on the floor was Maron's headband. Chiaki, like Kaiki, began to be very worried. ...

I hope I get commis