hi it is my first detective conan ff please write commis praise and criticism welcome!

Conan was still asleep when the sun shone in his room with the Mori family. Ran was about to wake him up because he had to go to school.
,, Hey Conan! Stand up ! You have school! "
She knocked loudly on his door, but after a short while she didn't hear him get ready. She heard a strong cough. Ran Mori carefully opened the door and saw Conan in his bed. Drops of sweat formed on his forehead. He coughed. He was probably sick.
* He doesn't look good, he better stay home. *
,, Conan! ", whispered Ran and sat down next to Conan on the bed.
,,Yes ? "asked Ran.
He sounded very weak and he wasn't feeling well. His bones felt strangely hot.
“You'd better stay at home and I'll go to the pharmacy now. "
,,OK!"
Ran quickly got dressed and started walking. Conan sat up slowly and walked towards the phone, leaning lightly against the wall.Now he dialed Professor Agasa's number.
,,Hello! Agasa here. "
"Hal-lo this is Shinichi."
"You sound sick!"
,,I am too! My bones feel so hot, just like after I took the poison! "
"What do you think is a late reaction?"
,,I do not know-"
His voice gave up. And the phone fell to the floor. Conan fell too. He was lying on the floor. Severe pain flashed through his small body. Conan felt like he was dying, as if his bones were melting. He knew the feeling. He closed his eyes in pain. For a moment that was like an eternity, despite the pain, he lay there and did not move. Then after a sheer eternity he tried to straighten up. The pain in his body and especially in his bones had not yet subsided. He was very hot. In addition, Conan could hardly stand up. Somehow he meant that something was different. His things were tight and the buttons were falling off.Had he grown, but that's not possible, right? Slowly but surely the stabbing pain and heat in his body subsided. Now he looked in the mirror and recognized himself! Yourself as Shinichi. Had the poison stopped working? He quickly ran to the closet where his things were. There he also had, well hidden, a couple of big things. He dressed quickly. Then he wanted to go to Agasa, who was now worried about Conan because he suddenly stopped calling. Had something happened to him? He and Ai had no idea what happened!
Shinichi wrote a note: “Dear Ran, my parents picked me up, I couldn't wait for you because I was really too sad. Please do not forget me! I love you! Conan! "
Now he hurried to the professor's house.
With his voice transposer he called in Conan's voice: "Professor Agasa open it!"
,, I'm coming Shinichi! "He opened the door within a short period of time and was very surprised." Shinichi! ""Yep, I'm grown up again and I'm doing great!"
"I like to think so!"
,, Hello Ai! "Shinichi shouted when he saw the blonde girl walk past.
"Kudo!"
"Yes, I am grown up again and soon you will be too!" Since you took the poison two weeks after me, you will be big again in two weeks! "
"Honestly what?"
"Yes, it was the same for me! I got sick and then after a painful breakdown I was finally grown up again! "
"That's fantastic news!"
“Yes, but I have to go to Ran now. "
He started walking without saying goodbye. Without knowing that it was a somewhat different kind of farewell. Little did he know that he would never see her again. He ran because it was starting to rain heavily. He was almost at the office of Kogoro Mori, Ran's father. Suddenly he saw a black figure.
,,Goodbye forever!"
The person hit him hard in the stomach with his fist. Shinichi sank to the floor in pain. Just before he passed out from the pain, he recognized gin and vodka.A shot.
He said: “Goodbye Ran! I love you!"
Gin and vodka disappeared. Shinichi hardly noticed anything. His shoulder was very painful and there was blood everywhere. ,, Shinichi! Shinichi! "He wasn't dead yet, not even unconscious, but he couldn't assign the voice." My Shinichi! Please don't die, not now! Not when I've heard your words! "
"Ran," he muttered, barely audible.
Then Ran heard sirens. The ambulance came. It happened like in slow motion. There was an oppressive silence that devoured everything. No sound could be heard. They just worried about the student detective in silence. Shinichi was taken to the hospital and Ran was interrogated by the police for beating gin and vodka.
,, So I had to get medicine for Conan, but when I got back I only found a note from him. His parents picked him up and I wanted to see if he was still with Agasa. On the way I saw the figures and how they shot Shinichi.I had to help him! "
"Well if that is the case! Of course, I would hardly have thought you could do anything else! "said Megure.
"I was really scared for him, do you think Shinichi will survive the attack?"
“I don't know, he was really badly injured and as long as nothing has been heard from the hospital, we cannot guarantee anything, especially not his health! But you know that the men in black are part of a gang of murderers. They were also there for the murder at the amusement park. You were still in contact with Shinichi and I think that's why he went into hiding! "
"That would be possible and have you found out something about a poison? I overheard Shinichi and he was talking about a poison. It's supposed to shrink and he still had no antidote. "

kapi is not quite finished yet!