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Hey ...
Hey everyone!
So first of all, THANK YOU for the lovely clerks ...
And I wanted to ask you something:
If there is any criticism, write it in, no matter how small.
Because I take part in a writing competition and hope that you will help me if there are mistakes and so on ... ^^
THANK YOU shcon!
I really love you!
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The wind was icy and a cold spell literally invaded the village of Konohagakure. It was quite unusual for the people in this village that it was so cold, because the temperatures here were usually mostly warm. Nobody dared to go out into the street, because leaving the warm home in such freezing temperatures was pure suicide.
But if you looked more closely, you could see a girl who hesitantly and with elf-like ease stepped outside the gates of Konoha. There was something springy about her gait and her long, blue hair was blowing in the blowing wind. But this girl was in no hurry to get into the warmth.Rather, her gaze seemed empty and her demeanor negative and sublime.
What normal person would have thought that exactly this girl left the said village a few years ago in order to become stronger? Who would have thought that the unsightly little thing would turn into such a pretty Kunoichi? Who could have guessed that a warm heart beat beneath this rough, cold facade ... beat for the one who despised it? Nobody, because you would have had to get to know her first and nobody had bothered ...
There were tracks in the snow where the Kunoichi had just gone. How long had she not been here? It seemed like an eternity to her and much longer. How much had changed? Was it still the same people? The same hokage? And HE? What had happened to him?
She felt her heart beating faster and her feet taking her at a faster pace to the village, which she had left a few years before, full of hatred and sadness.When she got to the big oak door, two guards blocked her way. "So security has been increased here! Something must have happened!" But she had expected that and pulled out her Konoha headband and the Hyuuga emblem. The guards gasped. Was this the kid from Hyuugaclan who left exactly 4 years ago to get stronger? They frowned, but Hinata was allowed to pass. Her blue hair was covered in snow and her clothes soaked in white. Slowly she passed the gate and paid no attention to the guards. Something else she'd put aside: your kindness. What use was it if you were despised anyway? Deep inside her she was still the little girl who dreamed of great emotions at night and who watched her dream prince during the day. But as I said, this was deep inside her. At a point where she no longer suspected any feelings.She didn't care what the others thought of her as long as ... "Hi ... Hinata?", The young Kunoichi was rudely torn from her thoughts. Slowly she turned to the person and gave them a cold look. "E ... Sorry! I must have mixed you up!", This person pushed around now. A blond-haired boy appeared next to her and Hinata's heart skipped for a moment. She wanted to forget this boy, but couldn't. "No. You didn't mistake me for me!", The blue-haired woman replied and looked at the person who had spoken to her, still penetrating and cold. It was a girl of 18 years with rose-colored, shoulder-length hair and beautiful, warm green eyes. "So it's really you?", She shouted angrily and Hinata just nodded coolly.
His gaze was still fixed on the Hyuuga. He couldn't help but look at her. He knew she loved him. But he couldn't love her! Love was forbidden for him! He had loved his parents and they had gone ... he had loved old Hokage and he had gone ... he had loved SASUKE like a brother but he too had left.Why love when everyone was leaving anyway? It just became pointless. And yet he had to look at her. Look into her lilac eyes, which were almost white. Yes, Hinata was a beauty. She had long hair down to her bottom and a fairy-like appearance. Her body was very feminine and matched her beautiful face with flawless, fair skin. Yes, she was pretty. "You have changed!" He thought, amused. Yes, she had changed a lot.
She still felt the searching, exploring gaze resting on her. She wasn't uncomfortable with it. On the contrary: she was happy about it! At last he accepted her. She had secretly observed Naruto earlier: he had a great figure and his blond hair was still so nicely tousled. All in all, he was very grown up and you could see the prints of his muscles even through the thick fabric. Timidly she raised her face and could look into his crystal clear blue eyes, which radiated so much pain and sadness that Hinata's heart cramped."Well ... what are we going to do now?", Nagged Sakura after a while. It had become too stupid for her to just stand around. "I think I'll take Hinata to my office first! After all, I have to enter her into the Konoha book again!", Naruto replied and smiled slightly for the first time since they met. "So you've finally become Hokage!", Thought the Hyuuga and it worked in her head. So he had finally made it. Sakura just nodded and then disappeared while Naruto and Hinata were on their way to the Hokage Tower. They walked side by side in silence, always careful not to touch or even look at each other. It was a game ... a game they both got into. This boy was the only one she'd ever loved. Even during her training, she had only seen his face in front of her eyes. But nothing had changed. Naruto was still so cold and unpredictable. He had just become Hokage, otherwise he hadn't changed.The young Hyuuga was torn from her thoughts by an abruptly stopping Naruto. Like him, she stopped and immediately saw the reason for it. A strong, very familiar chakra was approaching! "Sasuke ...", the blond-haired only mumbled and disappeared at the same moment. "Well wait," thought the Kunoichi, "I can play this game too!" and she was gone too. The place where they had just stood didn’t remind one of the two of them. And no one cared either!
He just stood there. Of course he was sorry that he had left Hinata there ... but suddenly that girl appeared next to him and looked at him guiltily. "Did you think I couldn't do this technique?" She asked slightly annoyed and then used her Byakugan. "He's about two minutes away!" She started without taking her eyes off the horizon. She had learned to expand her blood legacy over long distances and to control it better.The Hokage watched in amazement as the girl next to him used her byakugan without any problems. The blood legacy had been one of her weaknesses then. "Wow!" He whistled appreciatively. Smiling, the Hyuuga turned to him and her eyes went back to normal. "Well, I just trained a bit!", She replied with a laugh and Naruto had to admit for better or worse that he was interested in the new Hinata ... just as he liked the old Hinata! But she had never noticed and over time he had given up showing feelings. After all, nothing had changed ... right? But that was unimportant at the moment, because at that moment he saw a figure approaching him, which collapsed shortly before its destination. Naruto and Hinata quickly ran to the person and realized with horror that ...
So first of all, THANK YOU for the lovely clerks ...
And I wanted to ask you something:
If there is any criticism, write it in, no matter how small.
Because I take part in a writing competition and hope that you will help me if there are mistakes and so on ... ^^
THANK YOU shcon!
I really love you!
___________________________________________________________
The wind was icy and a cold spell literally invaded the village of Konohagakure. It was quite unusual for the people in this village that it was so cold, because the temperatures here were usually mostly warm. Nobody dared to go out into the street, because leaving the warm home in such freezing temperatures was pure suicide.
But if you looked more closely, you could see a girl who hesitantly and with elf-like ease stepped outside the gates of Konoha. There was something springy about her gait and her long, blue hair was blowing in the blowing wind. But this girl was in no hurry to get into the warmth.Rather, her gaze seemed empty and her demeanor negative and sublime.
What normal person would have thought that exactly this girl left the said village a few years ago in order to become stronger? Who would have thought that the unsightly little thing would turn into such a pretty Kunoichi? Who could have guessed that a warm heart beat beneath this rough, cold facade ... beat for the one who despised it? Nobody, because you would have had to get to know her first and nobody had bothered ...
There were tracks in the snow where the Kunoichi had just gone. How long had she not been here? It seemed like an eternity to her and much longer. How much had changed? Was it still the same people? The same hokage? And HE? What had happened to him?
She felt her heart beating faster and her feet taking her at a faster pace to the village, which she had left a few years before, full of hatred and sadness.When she got to the big oak door, two guards blocked her way. "So security has been increased here! Something must have happened!" But she had expected that and pulled out her Konoha headband and the Hyuuga emblem. The guards gasped. Was this the kid from Hyuugaclan who left exactly 4 years ago to get stronger? They frowned, but Hinata was allowed to pass. Her blue hair was covered in snow and her clothes soaked in white. Slowly she passed the gate and paid no attention to the guards. Something else she'd put aside: your kindness. What use was it if you were despised anyway? Deep inside her she was still the little girl who dreamed of great emotions at night and who watched her dream prince during the day. But as I said, this was deep inside her. At a point where she no longer suspected any feelings.She didn't care what the others thought of her as long as ... "Hi ... Hinata?", The young Kunoichi was rudely torn from her thoughts. Slowly she turned to the person and gave them a cold look. "E ... Sorry! I must have mixed you up!", This person pushed around now. A blond-haired boy appeared next to her and Hinata's heart skipped for a moment. She wanted to forget this boy, but couldn't. "No. You didn't mistake me for me!", The blue-haired woman replied and looked at the person who had spoken to her, still penetrating and cold. It was a girl of 18 years with rose-colored, shoulder-length hair and beautiful, warm green eyes. "So it's really you?", She shouted angrily and Hinata just nodded coolly.
His gaze was still fixed on the Hyuuga. He couldn't help but look at her. He knew she loved him. But he couldn't love her! Love was forbidden for him! He had loved his parents and they had gone ... he had loved old Hokage and he had gone ... he had loved SASUKE like a brother but he too had left.Why love when everyone was leaving anyway? It just became pointless. And yet he had to look at her. Look into her lilac eyes, which were almost white. Yes, Hinata was a beauty. She had long hair down to her bottom and a fairy-like appearance. Her body was very feminine and matched her beautiful face with flawless, fair skin. Yes, she was pretty. "You have changed!" He thought, amused. Yes, she had changed a lot.
She still felt the searching, exploring gaze resting on her. She wasn't uncomfortable with it. On the contrary: she was happy about it! At last he accepted her. She had secretly observed Naruto earlier: he had a great figure and his blond hair was still so nicely tousled. All in all, he was very grown up and you could see the prints of his muscles even through the thick fabric. Timidly she raised her face and could look into his crystal clear blue eyes, which radiated so much pain and sadness that Hinata's heart cramped."Well ... what are we going to do now?", Nagged Sakura after a while. It had become too stupid for her to just stand around. "I think I'll take Hinata to my office first! After all, I have to enter her into the Konoha book again!", Naruto replied and smiled slightly for the first time since they met. "So you've finally become Hokage!", Thought the Hyuuga and it worked in her head. So he had finally made it. Sakura just nodded and then disappeared while Naruto and Hinata were on their way to the Hokage Tower. They walked side by side in silence, always careful not to touch or even look at each other. It was a game ... a game they both got into. This boy was the only one she'd ever loved. Even during her training, she had only seen his face in front of her eyes. But nothing had changed. Naruto was still so cold and unpredictable. He had just become Hokage, otherwise he hadn't changed.The young Hyuuga was torn from her thoughts by an abruptly stopping Naruto. Like him, she stopped and immediately saw the reason for it. A strong, very familiar chakra was approaching! "Sasuke ...", the blond-haired only mumbled and disappeared at the same moment. "Well wait," thought the Kunoichi, "I can play this game too!" and she was gone too. The place where they had just stood didn’t remind one of the two of them. And no one cared either!
He just stood there. Of course he was sorry that he had left Hinata there ... but suddenly that girl appeared next to him and looked at him guiltily. "Did you think I couldn't do this technique?" She asked slightly annoyed and then used her Byakugan. "He's about two minutes away!" She started without taking her eyes off the horizon. She had learned to expand her blood legacy over long distances and to control it better.The Hokage watched in amazement as the girl next to him used her byakugan without any problems. The blood legacy had been one of her weaknesses then. "Wow!" He whistled appreciatively. Smiling, the Hyuuga turned to him and her eyes went back to normal. "Well, I just trained a bit!", She replied with a laugh and Naruto had to admit for better or worse that he was interested in the new Hinata ... just as he liked the old Hinata! But she had never noticed and over time he had given up showing feelings. After all, nothing had changed ... right? But that was unimportant at the moment, because at that moment he saw a figure approaching him, which collapsed shortly before its destination. Naruto and Hinata quickly ran to the person and realized with horror that ...