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here is the 2nd chapter; 3
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Hinata felt these looks from Naruto on her body and looked shyly to the side. She almost forgot what she actually wanted to ask Naruto. Naruto saw her reaction and had to smile and asked her: "What did you want from me, Hinata-chan?" Hinata looked back at Naruto and swallowed. "I wanted to ask you if .." she tapped her fingers together again. "Do I what?" Chopped up Naruto and clasped his arms behind his head, watching her finger play. "Wouldn't you like to eat something with me?" Said the little one and looked at him hopefully. She was slightly startled when she saw an indefinable Naruto grin on her face. // Why is he grinning like that? \\ Hinata wondered when Naruto answered. "So a date?" Hinata's face blushed suddenly and stared at the floor. "Sure, why not?" // She looks cute when she's that red. \\ He thought while answering. The Hyuga heiress managed to put a smile on her face and noticed how something wrapped around her wrist. She looked at her hand and saw that Naruto took her by the hand and pulled her behind her. Holding hands, the two went towards the noodle shop and Hinata was red in the face as always. // Naruto-kun holds my hand! \\.

When the two of them got to the snack bar, Naruto saw that Sakura was on there and he smiled. "Look, Hinata, this is Sakura!" Naruto reported this happily to Hinata and sat down next to Kounichi, who was sitting alone. // no! Menno! \\ Hinata yelped in her mind.
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short
very short
corrosive x____x
I'm trying to increase the chapter length
next time
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