wrong decision?

1st chapter
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What was that?

Yuka is just on her way to Tanzagukei. She threw her ninja headband into some bushes so that no one would either
knows their origin and also changes in character. She has resolved to put on a cold look
To scare people off because the last thing she wants is to be approached by a guy who ran along.
She walks down the path to Tanzagukei. If you can even call it a path, because the path consists of only one
trampled ground and a few stones that are on the "path".
Suddenly Yuka hears ninjas coming. She hides quickly because she doesn't know how strong the ninjas are.
° It should be about two. I hope they don't notice me. ° Before Yuka started thinking about the ninjas
she could hear voices in front of the bushes in which she was hiding. Yuka was almost frightened
cried out. Fortunately, she was still able to suppress it. She was right, there were only two ninjas and she was eavesdropping
the two.
`` Have you heard that Tanzagukei can be given a new identity? ´´
`` You mean by looks and all the trimmings. ´´ said the asked surprised. `` With looks and all the trimmings.
And the whole thing only costs 100Ryo. ´´ replies the other. `` We have to go, otherwise we'll be too late. ´´ spoke at once
the other ninja to his colleague. When Yuka is sure that the two are one hundred percent gone, she comes out of the
Bushes emerge again. `` Very interesting. I need a new identity now. ´´ Yuka was talking more to herself.
10 minutes later Yuka sees the city gate and made it a bit faster. But when she finally got to the city gate
has arrived, she would like to turn around again, because it was market day and a big crowd. ° I totally forgot about that.Tanzagukei is famous for the big market that is there every 2 weeks. ° Already at the city gate there is a huge crowd, how should it then
to go first in the city itself. With a queasy feeling, Yuka squeezes through the crowd. ° Damn where is this s *****
Stand to change identity. ° Suddenly she sees a stand in front of her with a huge sign saying "New Identity,
only here "it says. ° That wasn't there before. How could I have overlooked that. ° She was annoyed in her thoughts before she goes in. But there
when she arrives, she sees an arrow leading away from the sign and pointing to a door. She opens the door and to her surprise there was none
Human soul in the room. She decides to keep going in, thinking that there might still be a door, but it wasn't.
`` Hello, is there maybe someone here, if so, it would be very nice to get in touch! ´´ she calls into the room. Suddenly there is a croaking behind her
Voice. `` Hello my dear. Do you want to change your identity? ´´ Yuka was startled, but what she saw worried her, because she saw no one,
not even a little mouse. `` Who or what are they ?! Come out if you dare! ´´ And tries to sound as firm as possible.
But she doesn't get an answer. She shouts the same thing again, only louder. Then a voice answered. `` Don't be so loud or do you want them
wake the dead. ´´ When Yuka turns around to see who is there, she sees something that she would have thought there was no such thing.
Because she sees a ...

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Stop here to create a little bit of tension. Hope that at least now someone leaves a pick-up.
Otherwise I would have no motivation to continue writing because I don't know if anyone is reading it at all.
And you want me to keep writing, don't you?