Translation
Reine Gedanken
Light [in] moonlight
Hello,
I know that I haven't taken care of my FFs for a long time. Sometimes I just lacked the inspiration, but I found it again in this little piece of work that was just finished. The FFs will soon be completed quickly because I won't have a lot of time next year.
Next I would like to thank you for the incredibly positive response to my first poem. I never thought it would be commented on at all. I have also taken your advice to heart, and maybe I will really try to make an FF out of it.
This poem seems to be more of a comparative work, but in connection with my FF "The Rabbit's ancient fullmoon night" my confusing thoughts flew to me.
The thriller "Because death is bitter" by Elizabeth George serves as a further inspiration for me. I hope you like the poem and I would be very happy about your feedback this time as well.
Long live inspiration! Your shizun
_____________________
light[in]moonlight
Like a silver plate
glittering, blinking, not polished
the eye is perceived
when you look in someone's face.
A pair of glittering discs in the middle of such a "colorless" face
expressive inviting addictive
They look at you
You look at her
You mean to see
and do not see.
light
What do you see when you look up at the moon?
Do you think the same as your loved one when you see him?
increasing gradually decreasing radiant
Escaped like a snot
It hangs in the sky.
Many saw him
but none could fathom it.
shining radiantly driving the darkness away
Is it true that the moon was once the earth's lover
or is he one of her eyes after all?
Where?
But where is the second one ?!
The symbol of separated love
longingly complex unfathomableIt seems that way.
Just as in Europe the man in the moon seems to look down on you
when desperately looking for help
drifting around giving restfulness giving strength
So it is in Asia the wise rabbit in the moon
who comforts one
with his presence.
moonlight
The moon seems as natural to us as love
Science finds a solution for the moon, but for love: Error.
glittering expressively drifting around, shining brightly, longingly
Light in the moonlight
Like love, he drives us around
As in eyes, we cannot read in it.
He who smiles down at us seemingly knowing
maybe he hides the wisdom of this world in his light.
Light in the moonlight - this seems love.
I know that I haven't taken care of my FFs for a long time. Sometimes I just lacked the inspiration, but I found it again in this little piece of work that was just finished. The FFs will soon be completed quickly because I won't have a lot of time next year.
Next I would like to thank you for the incredibly positive response to my first poem. I never thought it would be commented on at all. I have also taken your advice to heart, and maybe I will really try to make an FF out of it.
This poem seems to be more of a comparative work, but in connection with my FF "The Rabbit's ancient fullmoon night" my confusing thoughts flew to me.
The thriller "Because death is bitter" by Elizabeth George serves as a further inspiration for me. I hope you like the poem and I would be very happy about your feedback this time as well.
Long live inspiration! Your shizun
_____________________
light[in]moonlight
Like a silver plate
glittering, blinking, not polished
the eye is perceived
when you look in someone's face.
A pair of glittering discs in the middle of such a "colorless" face
expressive inviting addictive
They look at you
You look at her
You mean to see
and do not see.
light
What do you see when you look up at the moon?
Do you think the same as your loved one when you see him?
increasing gradually decreasing radiant
Escaped like a snot
It hangs in the sky.
Many saw him
but none could fathom it.
shining radiantly driving the darkness away
Is it true that the moon was once the earth's lover
or is he one of her eyes after all?
Where?
But where is the second one ?!
The symbol of separated love
longingly complex unfathomableIt seems that way.
Just as in Europe the man in the moon seems to look down on you
when desperately looking for help
drifting around giving restfulness giving strength
So it is in Asia the wise rabbit in the moon
who comforts one
with his presence.
moonlight
The moon seems as natural to us as love
Science finds a solution for the moon, but for love: Error.
glittering expressively drifting around, shining brightly, longingly
Light in the moonlight
Like love, he drives us around
As in eyes, we cannot read in it.
He who smiles down at us seemingly knowing
maybe he hides the wisdom of this world in his light.
Light in the moonlight - this seems love.