Chapter: My first FanFic Please check it out!

Hi folks, I love FanFics
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and always wanted to write my own, which I have now done.
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Please please please tell me what you think
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and whether I should continue writing it.
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have fun ( ? )
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As always, Vegeta is training in the CC gravity room
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suddenly the door opens and gravity normalizes immediately.
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Annoyed, he looks to the door to find out who is disturbing his training.
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Trunks is standing in the doorway, he looks very tired.
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"What do you want ?"
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"Mom said I should get you, she wants to show you something important."
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Vegeta thinks - "What can be more important than my training?" -
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Vegeta thinks about it for a moment and then says "yes, I'll be right there".
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He swings a towel over his shoulders and then leaves the room.
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He walks past Trunks who is looking at something with concentration. Vegeta interested
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that doesn't continue at the moment, and goes up the stairs where he meets Bulma.<br />
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Bulma: "Oh ... who is that man over there? Do I know him? You actually know
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when was the last time we saw each other? You're just training ... I miss you. "
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Vegeta: "Yeah yeah ... you know I have to train with it ..." Bulma interrupts him,
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Bulma: "Yes, of course, of course ... so that you become stronger than Son Goku.
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Well ... but that's not why I called you. Take a look at this ...
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-Bulma is holding an A4 color printout in her hand- this is a picture of the new Planet Namek.
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Vegeta: "Are you kidding me? That's a black picture."
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Bulma: "Exactly! The planet is gone. And the inhabitants too. Someone or something
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destroyed it, the rubble is still flying around. "
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- Vegeta gets a glow in his eyes, he is hoping for a new strong opponent -
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Bulma: "Vegeta what do you think of that? Vegeta? Hello?" Vegeta: "What? Um,
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Don't know I hope there will be some action again.<br />
Now my training is paying off.
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Vegeta grins maliciously and leaves the room-
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should I continue writing?
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(if there are no comments, I think no)