Fanfic: Vegeta`s Family oder Unerwartete Kräfte !?
Chapter: Vegeta`s Family or Unexpected Forces!?
Preface:
<br />
This FF is about Vegeta's family and how he treats her.
<br />
Trunks is 14 years and Bra is 5 years, but just for history!
<br />
Go:
<br />
<br />
Prehistory:
<br />
- A surprise for Vegeta
<br />
<br />
Vegeta trains in the gravity room.
<br />
The display shows 1000 g.
<br />
"I wonder where Trunks is", Vegeta paused, "he said he wanted to train with me. This youth is revealed today!"
<br />
Suddenly there was a knock on the door of the G-room, Vegeta looked and saw Bulma.
<br />
"Vegeta, come with me quickly ... I have a surprise for you", Bulma's voice was muffled through the thick door of the G-room.
<br />
"What do you want, I'm training! Can't you see that ????", Vegeta grumbled at Bulma.
<br />
"Oh Vegeta, come on now! I won't hold you up long either!"
<br />
"Oh," Vegeta growled and hesitantly walked out to Bulma.
<br />
She led him through a couple of rooms until they came to a door where Bulma stopped.<br />
Vegeta stood behind her with his arms crossed over his chest.
<br />
"Close your eyes!" Said Bulma.
<br />
"Why?" Vegeta asked in his usual, scornful look.
<br />
"Don't ask like that, just do it!" Replied Bulma.
<br />
But Vegeta didn't think about it at all, so she suddenly tied a cloth over his eyes.
<br />
"Hey, Bulma !! What are you doing ?!" Vegeta yelled and whirled around.
<br />
"Vegeta, hold still!", Bulma held him.
<br />
He just did what she said, knowing that he would only get in trouble with her again if he didn't.
<br />
He heard her turn the doorknob and lead him inside.
<br />
Bulma closed the door behind them.
<br />
Vegeta felt Bulma's hands untie the knot on the handkerchief and take it down.
<br />
When he opened his eyes he saw .................................
<br />
<br />
Sequel follows..........
<br />
-----------------------------------------------> Feedback < ------------------------------------------<br />
I would like to know if I should continue writing (that's why the part is so short * g *), and if my writing style in this short face part is good !!!!
<br />
0 '. ".' 0
<br />
((T)) by SSJ4
<br />
(.) $ (.)
<br />
(") .. (")
<br />