Chapter: C18's dark past (Part2)

So here is the sequel to my second FF! YOU have to write me COMMENTS again and tell me what I still have to improve!
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Ciao, Aakane ;-)
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C18's dark past (Part 2)
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"What happened C18 ???" cried kruirin excitedly.
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“You know, when you've got that much money, it often happens that you argue. And that's exactly what happened at home. One evening I heard screams coming from the kitchen. I ran as fast as I could went to look and saw my mother passed out on the floor. I immediately called an ambulance and woke C17. Then I found a note on the kitchen table with a message from my father. He was sorry and he would get out of the dust do ... "C18's eyes filled with tears.
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* I never thought that a cyborg could cry * thought Kruirin and took 18 in his arms. After a few minutes she had calmed down and went on talking.<br />
"From now on, my mother took care of the money all by herself and she didn't seem to mind. Everything went on as usual. One day a new student came into my class. His name was Sam and I immediately got into him in love ... after two weeks we were lovers and we did something almost every day. "
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Jealousy rose in Kruirin. He couldn't have it if 18-18 thought other men were great too (I'll just say a word the size * grin *)!
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"That was the happiest time of my life back then. I felt safe and I was happy to have someone like Sam with me. One day I was walking home from school when suddenly a man stood in front of me and said I was perfect for his new project. He wanted me to come, but I refused. Then he said I would change my mind, otherwise I would soon be alone in the world. I thought he was stupid and went further than me When I got home I called my mother, but she didn't answer.When I went to her bedroom it was a horrible picture. There was blood everywhere! My mother was on the floor! She was dead ... Kruirin looked scared and deeply hit at the same time.
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"I'm really sorry, C18 ..."
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"They don't need to be sorry, but I immediately thought of the man I met on the street. And I had terrible suspicions. I was afraid ..."
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