Chapter: CALL !!!! VERY IMPORTANT !!!!!

Please, please read my story> A weak point? <!!!! I have to know if it is good !! Criticize and praise what you found good and / or not good! Please read> A weak point? <!!!!!
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And write clerks underneath !! the first part can be found under Chana, the second part under SSjChana !!!!
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Please read and rate !!!!!
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cu your chana