Fanfic: Was wäre wenn...? Überarbeitet!!

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"She looked at him with tearful eyes. "Do you even know ... what you are asking of me?" "Yes ... promise me ... please ..." She nodded and tried to return her tears
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to keep. Kijo's weak hand slipped under Chana's black hair. When he put his hand on the back of her neck, he weakly pulled her down to him. Their lips touched one last time. When Chana noticed that his hand slipped from the back of her neck and fell on the edge of the bed, tears rolled down her cheeks. But she didn't want to detach her lips from his, still warm, soft and gentle lips. But then she broke away from him. She looked at him. It looked like he was sleeping.She put him in the middle of the bed and pulled the covers up over his head. Then she left the room in silence but crying.
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“Do you remember?” Chana nodded silently. Kijo looked so alive ... but when Chana looked over him, a holy glow shone over his hair. "Chana ... you promised me ... live on ... even without me ... you can do it ... because I will always be with you ..." "Yes ... Kijo?" " Yes? ”She threw herself into his arms and held on to him. Then she looked deep into his eyes and he kissed her. "I will always be with you and take care of you ... I promise ..." she heard him before opening her eyes.
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"She is coming to!" Called one of her familiar voices. Chana had to blink several times until she no longer saw blurred. Then she recognized the others, her father, sister, Vegetan, Picco and Piccolo, Dende, Popo and Vegeto. "Well, finally you're awake !!", Son-Gota said worried and hugged her sister happily, "Have you hurt yourself?"" Ne ... no ... wa ... what happened anyway? ", she asked, holding her head, which hurt her a lot." Well, Vegeto saved you! ", Goku said and grinned at Vegeto. He stood there embarrassed." Thank you. But how and why did you do it? "" You threw yourself off the platform. Well, when you were already about to crash, we only landed and Picco had seen you crash. He told us and of course we were all shocked ... "" ... But Vegeto was the first to catch himself and is of course right after you. ", added Vegetan proudly." And you even passed Master Quince, he was amazed! ", continue Son-Gota." About the middle of the quince tower he finally caught up with you and caught you. Then of course he'll be up with you right away. ", said Goku and Piccolo continued:" You were passed out when he got up here again. "Chana got up and went to Vegeto:" I owe you my life!You are a real hero! "She gave him a peck on the cheek and Vegeto blushed." You can get one from me too, after all you saved my sister and twice as good! ", then Son-Gota gave him a smack. He got even redder. The others had to laugh at the sight.
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'It's been a decade ... since Kijo died ... I don't know how many years, probably depends on the age ... I'm now a mother myself and even a grandmother and great-grandmother. I always kept my promise to Kijo ...
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Til today.
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The wind blows through my now gray hair. It's a warm, lukewarm wind. I'm standing by the lake where Kijo and I often met back then.
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My husband is already dead, as are my parents, Bulma, Vegeta and Gohan. Piccolo, Dende, Son-Goten and Trunks have also died. Picco is God now. Marron ... I don't know what became of her ... after Trunks' death she disappeared without a trace.All of our friends, the Z-Fighters, as they were called, are already dead. Yes, even Jess and Kazumie. They got married and had twins, boys. After that they were lucky again, twins again, but this time girls. I am the only living Sayiajin who can fight. There was no interest from my children and from their children anyway. Sayiajin blood no longer flows in her veins. Vegetan died a year ago of heart disease. Illnesses do not stop at us either. We may live longer than others, but we are not immortal. I would never have wanted that either. Because it would be difficult to feel comfortable in a time, to be able to fit in, in a time in which one does not belong.
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I must be over 100 by now, that's how long I've lived ... at some point I stopped counting and on one of my birthdays I even had to ask my daughter how old I was.
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Again a wind blows, but involuntarily a name slips from my lips: "Kijo ..." I close my eyes and enjoy the wind.When I open it again, Kijo stands in front of me. "What are you doing here?", I look down at him, "You haven't changed." I have to grin. "But I'm now, old and wrinkled. I've got married and have children, grandchildren, great-grandchildren." But he says nothing, grins like a little boy and grabs my old hand, which is covered with age spots, and slowly pulls me behind him here. Across a meadow on a path. We go along it. Until we get to a house. He opens the door, it's my parents' house. When we pass the mirror in the hallway, I happened to take a look inside and couldn't believe it. I look 16 !! "W ... what ... is going on here? And where am I?" "At home", that's all I get as an answer. Then he pulls me into the living room, everyone is sitting there. As before. I can't believe my eyes Son-Gota is 15, as is Vegetan. Vegeto, my lifesaver at the time, would have to be around 9 and the others ... But why are we so young again?I think about it for a moment, then it becomes clear to me. The last person with Saiyjin blood in their veins died, that was me. '
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and done! now tell me your opinion! cu chana