A new love

This is my first fanfic, I hope it turned out well.

Night fell in the former castle of the Aldaines and Asgar, Alaine and Valnar got ready to sleep. Asgar was just undressing when Alaine was in the bathroom combing her red hair. She slipped into her almost transparent nightgown and looked around the corner. Asgar was still standing there undressing. Alaine had to smile. She had been able to see his muscular torso for a long time. Then Asgar looked up. he just stood there in his pants. Alaine slowly came closer to him. She wanted him, she loved him. When she was only a few inches away from him, she decided to spoil him again. Why did Alaine always have to spoil him? But their relationship meant so much to her that she kept doing it. she wrapped her arms around him and put on her most seductive look. her lips were only inches away from his when he pushed the Finders between himself and Alaine and turned away."I don't feel like cuddling with you now, Alaine." he just said coldly.

It was too much for Alaine. She turned on her heel and lay down in her coffin without a "good night wish".
A lonely bloody tear ran down her cheek. Slowly Alaine wondered if Asgar still loved her.
As a slight snore came from Asgar's coffin, she opened her coffin and put on her dressing gown. She had to talk to someone. She crept quietly into Valnar's room. He already seemed to be asleep. Alaine knocked gently on the lid of the coffin.
"Valnar, Valnar are you awake?"

From inside came a soft "yes" as an answer and valnar opened the coffin. He looked puzzled up at Alaine who was standing next to him, completely distraught.
"What is Alaine?"
"K-can we talk?" she sobbed.
"Yes of course."
He had to swallow hard at first when he saw Alaine in the moonlight. She looked so cute in that nightie ...
He got up and they sat on a sofa in his room.There Alaine burst into tears.
"What-what's going on?" asked he. Alaine had buried her face in her hands. a few tears dripped onto her nightgown.
"Since the she in Melsam, Asgar has been so different. Before he showed me his love every day, but not once since then." The words came out of her faltering. Now that she said it ... he also noticed that Asgar hadn't called her "darling" or "darling" for a long time. Carefully he put an arm on her shoulder to comfort her, then he said:
"What is he thinking of? If I had such a beautiful girlfriend, I would shower her with compliments." Alaine had calmed down a bit and looked into his blood-red eyes. He hadn't said those words since Aysha was dead. Valnar had to hold back not to tell her that he had loved her for a long time. His heartbeat was increasing rapidly.
"Are you serious?" Alaine now leaned against his upper body.
"Y-yes of course.""Thanks." She felt every muscle around his shirt. How good that felt ...
Now he put his other arm around her too. But Alaine also moved closer to his face. When he saw that one of her porters was hanging down to the side, he wondered if she had done it on purpose or was it just a coincidence.
Again and again he had to admonish himself. * Remember, she is Asgar's friend, you are just a little light in her life. *
But those thoughts faded when Alaine bent his head down. now he felt her breath on his neck. When their lips touched, he just thought: * Who is this damn Asgar? *
He slowly sat down on his lap. Alaine gave no resistance. both had closed their eyes. It was like she wanted it too. His hand slipped to her chest.

But then Alaine broke away from the kiss and did not look at him. She slipped off his lap.
"No, we are not allowed to. What was I thinking?"She disappeared from his room without saying another word. Now Valnar was sitting alone on the sofa, watching Alaine. He thought now he could tell her he loved her, but the chance was missed.

Alaine ran back to her room. Asgar was still snoring blissfully in his coffin. She slipped in too and cried herself to sleep.

So that was my first fanfic. I hope I get some clerks. Praise, complaints and suggestions for improvement are welcome.