Stink normal day ..?

Haii..this is my first FF so please don't be strict ^^ '
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It was like every morning, Ayumi was woken up by the sun, went into the bathroom and got ready. She ate her rolls on the way because she was late again. / oh shit now I got up earlier and come back too late .. well, later than kakashi I won't come anyway / A grin spreads on her lips. But that was quickly gone when she walked past the uchiah's property / * sighs * sasuke ... wiiso? .. Ahh Ayumi what do you think because you've finally managed to forget him, so stop now / So much Lost in her thoughts, she didn't even notice that a blond, excited boy was standing in front of her. Boom! Of course she walked into him! > ahh man ayumi what did we tell you don't dream who you run! said the blonde. > I didn't dream! you idiot .. </ Whenever she says you idiot she reminds me so much of sasuke exactly the same look, and in the same tone /> NARUTO! who is dreaming here? come on we have to go! <Ayumi was already running> Ayumi waiteeee !! <shouted Naruto after her!

At the training area

> there you are finally! <it came from a girl's voice
> Sakura-chan ... is Kakashi here yet? <Asked Naruto completely out of breath> haha ​​naruto there too? <Ayumi called from the tree and stuck his tongue out at the same time> aiaiai Ayumi you really don't do that now <suddenly it came from behind. > Kakashi! said the three at the same time. After a long, more or less hard day, everyone went home.

At home with Ayumi

> iuuu..I should take a shower <After showering. > ahh much better <she went to her balcony it was just twilight> ah how much I love this time I think I'll go for a little walk <no sooner said than done. She went out and headed towards the gate. She decided to go a little bit out of the village.After a while she came to a lake. The lake was beautiful and it was sunset. She sat down. > Here it was .. * sighs * <In her eyes flood alarm ruled> all this memory .. <

Soo that was the first Kapi a bit boring but well I have to start i-how ^^ I'm very happy about Kommis ^^