mistrusted me. And nevertheless....

I got up and brushed the dirt off my clothes. "So ... I'll go now!" I said with a smile. "Bye ...", said the two synchronously, and just when I was about 100 meters away, I heard screams and a bang.

I turned back to the spot with a jerk and ran over to it. The two were dead on the floor. "..." I looked down at them for a moment ... // could maybe ... Deidara? If so, then he's not far away from me! // Only now did I notice that the man was still alive. I ran to him. ".... you .... have ..... lied ...." he breathed at me. "Was there a man with long blond hair and blue eyes here?" I asked hastily. "...... yes ..... he .... has .... looked for .... ... looking for ..... and ...... if .... ..I ... now ..... lied ...... would have .... would be .... I ... also ....... not ..... better .. .... a- ", he died right in front of my eyes, exhaled one last time, but he smiled. He looked happy. I had no idea why. He hadn't even come close to achieving his goal .... Somehow I felt like crying.I missed Deidara. And if what I thought happened earlier, it would be for the second time. I looked over at the other in silence. she looked rather sad. // Facial expressions when dead ..... you can probably tell if someone got what he wanted ... in life ... //

I turned away. "Dei! If you're here anywhere, I'm here !!!!!!!" No answer. I sighed. // if I go back to headquarters now ... he's still lost here! Because he's not giving up ... but what should I do? I don't want to stop here either ... or would that be the best? // I finally decided to just sit there.

~ at your favorite Iwa-nin (I guess ^^) ~

"She must be here somewhere, and ..."
"Don't you think you're overlooking it, in the thick forest?"
"No, I don't, un!" Deidara shouted offended and turned away. Madara sat casually on the clay bird and let her legs dangle. Where others would have been afraid of heights, he had none at all. Deidara sat more in the middle of the crouched position.
"if you think so."
"I find you, un!"
"I don't doubt either ... I want to find her too. But we've been on the road since yesterday. If you go on like this for a few more weeks we'll still starve to death. Perhaps she found her way back on her own. It would be to be expected you yes. Or maybe she drew your attention to your explosion, she went there and you are no longer there? " Madara reminded the blond and looked at him piercingly, the Iwa-nin, however, continued to stare at the canopy. He was silent. "Can you hear me?" Madara asked and continued to look at the blonde. "Sure, un." Deidara knew that the older one was right, but he wanted to find me through his own merit. He didn't want to listen to him. "It doesn't matter whether you answer me or not. For my part, I keep looking on the ground.", Madara said and simply jumped off, from a height of several meters. The Uchiha hit the ground unharmed, which was a mystery to me. He looked around, and then went purposefully in one direction. Deidara didn't look after him. He just shifted stubbornly.

After a while, he sighed, flew a little lower and also jumped off. It caught itself first on a treetop, then on a lower branch, and finally landed unharmed on the forest floor. He immediately noticed Madara, who was waiting for him leaning against a tree. If that were a comic, a drop sign would have appeared on the back of Deidara's head. "Come on ...", the black-haired only said and went ahead. The other Nuke-Nin followed.

~ With me again ~
// Come on guys ... it's getting boring ... // I thought to myself. Dark thoughts developed in the back of my mind that I tried to suppress. Thoughts like: 'They're not looking for me at all', or the like. I knew exactly that it wasn't true.

I waited, waited. Waited and waited ....But nobody came.
Still, I didn't give up hope.
I don't do it now either.

After a while, Madara appears. I jump up euphorically. "Where's Deidara?" I literally gushes out of me. The Uchiha smiles briefly. I don't greet him, he doesn't greet me. "Behind me," he says and steps aside. My eyes sparkle when I see the blond one.

"Deidara!" I shout and jump around his neck.
"Kara ... I love you," he says to me.
"Me too ..." I say and kiss him.

End....
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.... or maybe not?
* throat *
first of all, for those who are on the hose:
Deidara
aradieD
hehe ^^

One more thing .... if that comes to the end, which is then written in the present, stupid .... I'll change it ^^

And now comes the promised afterword blah! xD
* clear throat again *
So .... I know the beginning was pretty chaotic, I got scared every time it said "new comment" xD (then I was happy when I read it ^^) Well, but then you liked it. ... I think my writing style has improved ... and if not: then he still does. And on the subject of whether there will be a sequel, if it will still take, because I do

1. Continue writing with my other FFs
2. I will completely change the first 4.5 capes again, including how Kara comes into the world * drop * that didn't work at all ....
and
3. Because lately I've been sitting at the PC long enough (and that's what the one who sits in RPGs for hours says xD) and I sometimes feel like writing another FF, probably Kingdom Hearts (although I don't know the 1, which is why it will be difficult) or Vampire Knight ... (maybe Dokuro-chan?; P)

but if there is a continuation, I will send my most loyal readers ne Pn ^^ By true I mean those who have correctly commented xD (yes babsi you too ^^)

And if .... someone has read this FF .... without writing a commi .... even if it's only in a year or so .... At least write me a pn with: "Hey me read your FF "or something! Isn't there that I've only accessed 3 regular readers at over 1100 .... tzetze ... there aren't that many caps now again ^^

to come back to the sequel ..... do you want that at all? : 3 xP

one last time,
your Denise;) ^^