Unwanted visit

Here is my fanfic. It's about Vegeta and Bulma leading a happy family life, but an unwanted guest shows up and moves his quarters to the C.C.

Unwanted visit

Some time ago Bulma had called the dragon Shenlong with Chichi and C18. All three had an important wish. He said that Bulma, Chichi and 18-18 look like they were in their mid-twenties.

"It's ok Chichi, I'll talk him into it until then." Said a very young-looking woman with long, silky blue hair.
Her eyes were sparkling ocean blue, she looked just beautiful, her body is perfectly shaped every man's dream. Two strong arms wrapped around her stomach. And someone kissed her on the neck.
"Whom are you going to talk to?" Vegeta asked after he had detached himself from Bulma's neck. He has black hair and his eyes were also jet black and very mysterious. He had muscles all over and a broad chest.
Just a real dream man, Bulma's dream man.
"Um ..." began Bulma. "So it's about you." she said and turned to him in his tight embrace so that their faces were only a few inches apart.
Bulma felt his hot breath on her skin. He started kissing her neck again. "Oh god." Bulma whispered. Vegeta looked Bulma into her beautiful eyes and grinned.
"What?" Asked Vegeta.
"Oh man, you make me weak when you hold me in your arms, even when you're near me my knees are weak." Bulma confessed.
Vegeta's grin widened. Bulma wanted to break free from his embrace, but Vegeta wouldn't let her escape.
"Please ..." asked Bulma. "No problem." with these words he lifted her chin a little and kissed her deeply. Bulma melted in his arms and her legs gave way. If Vegeta hadn't held her, she would have fallen to the ground.
Slowly he broke away from her again. "Wow." She just burst out.
"Why are you torturing me like that?" "So bad?" asked Vegeta.
"No, so beautiful." She replied and kissed him again, but this time more stormy. Bulma took off Vegeta's tank top, and he took off her blouse.
Suddenly someone cleared their throat behind them. Startled, she looked at the man standing at the door frame. Vegeta, who didn't notice anything, wanted to continue, when he noticed that Bulma wasn't there anymore, he followed her gaze.

So that was the first chapter.
I would be happy about commies.