Chapter: Fall

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Hey guys, I just want to state once, it's half past three in the morning, I just wrote 1300 words on my other One Piece story because I told myself there had to be a new chapter before I start a new fanfic, mine My eardrum is about to burst, but I'll never remove the headphones from my ears. So let's get back to the topic, I'm starting a new One Piece fanfic because
1. I can't stand to see Ace die, he's my favorite character next to Corby and Trafalgar Law,
2. I drew Dragon Quest 9 a few hours ago, what a sentence.
So just as a premonition I was extremely influenced by Dragon Quest when the idea was hatched, although a lot of ideas with the afterlife were there before, but only now do I decide to write them down.
I have no idea in which direction this FF is going or whether I will continue to write at all, it depends, especially on your feedback, if nobody reads it I don't have to bother to write it and I prefer to invert time and ideas in other stories .
I just start writing, the prologue will be short to medium, my minimum number of words only applies from the first chapter.
There are also two questions at the end of the chapter, because I want to know what you readers think, that's a vote. I explain the "races" differently.
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But let's first get to the main characters:

There we have the recently deceased Potgas D. Ace, who, without knowing it, has put up a lot of "overtime" for his guardian angel and would now actually be on the way to the afterlife. But as I said, actually.

And on the other hand Kira, 21. She has been a guardian for a year, in other words a fully trained guardian angel who managed to get one of the "most problematic" people on the whole Grandline, namely Portgas D. Ace, who had made it after a year To be killed, which of course does not do well with her.

And let's go:
"And here it is, really stupid that your protégé died after a year."
Lisa, an angel of death, Ace and Kira strolled side by side to the Soul Express. "And what do I have to do now?" "First you just have to get on the soul express, then the journey goes to the hereafter. First your" heart "is weighed. The scales are the only true justice, they decide whether you are in the Heaven or Hell or for how long. I tell you against Hell, Impel Down works like a sandpit. "Ace swallowed, after all, he was a pirate. "Don't worry."
They came to a huge platform. Ace had already noticed that they had to be in the sky, quite high, because a pretty big city was floating here.
"Kreech, Knackkk."
"Hey what was that?", Kira was upset, she had never seen anything like it."I don't know", Lisa also seemed confused even though she was already 75, although she looked like 26.
A bright beam of light exploded and the only thing Kira still felt was that the ground broke from under her feet and she fell.

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Okay that was a very short prologue, but I don't see how to extend it.
The 2 questions:
1. Should Ace and Kira land next to the Moby Dick or somewhere else and have to find the Moby Dick?
2. Should I write an omnipotent God or 4 mighty spirits: Aqua, Terra, Ignis and Aers (Latin: water, earth, fire, air), but the creatures from the hereafter remain the same?
And the third: Is it even worth writing the story further?
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