tomorrow.



Sooo, dear people. At first I'm really sorry that it took so long with the first chap, but I'm currently in the exam phase. Unfortunately, I'm not the kind of person who gets everything shoved up his ass, which is why I have to cram until the doctor comes. By the way, keep your fingers crossed that I'll survive math and English next week x.x.
But then there are holidays, during which I will hopefully get a little more in line ^^ '
As I said, even a nicely meant ass kick gets me further ...
But now for the Chap. Did you like it? What wasn't great? What could I have done better? You are also welcome to rub grammar and spelling errors under my nose. Maybe my language isn't that great. More / less literal speech? Should I dwell more on the feelings and thoughts of the charas? Have I missed your character and made ooc? Is the length of the chap appropriate or should it be shorter / longer?
I know that's a lot I want to know from you guys. Not everything has to be answered. But I just want to improve my writing style and all I need is a little picking with your opinion. : 3
It might sound a bit harsh now, but I don't want to see a simple "Wow, I think that's great, keep it up" here. After all, I also try to get something meaningful for your characters. So that could be appreciated a little too, right? ;)
Nyah ... the speech has become too long anyway ... so until <3

Your Meg ~

PS: A big thank you to Jey, who inspired me to write the title; *

PSS: Oh yes, and one more thing, I'm sorry to all of the people whose characters were neglected in the Chap. I am trying to improve my division!